Main Point/Title
Why I should eat Ice Cream every day
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Introduction:
That I should eat ice cream every day.
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The main point you want to make
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Argument 1:
Firstly because it is cold and there are different flavours.
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Useful words:
Firstly..
Secondly..
In my opinion..
People believe that…
I feel that..
I am sure that..
It is certain..
Therefore..
Moreover…
For this reason..
Reasons for
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Argument 2:
Secondly because it is yummy and you can eat on a hot day.
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Argument 3:
Thirdly because it is soft and it makes people happy.
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Conclusion:
I should eat ice cream everyday because it makes me happy.
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Sum up the main argument
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Hi Lucy,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your plan. I like all the arguments you have for eating Ice Cream everyday. You conclusion is very on point. It does make you happy. Will you be allowed to eat it everyday? Do you have a favourite flavour of Ice Cream or would you just like to eat any flavour?